What is wrong with the conclusion and sign off of the following IELTS letter below from a TASK ACHIEVEMENT point of view? 

Collect five main issues!


Your friend saw on social media that you are looking for a job, and offered to forward your application to his colleagues at the company where he works. Write your letter of application. 

In your letter

• refer to your friend when you mention the job you are interested in

• say why you think you would be the right fit for it

• give details of when and how they can reach you and your references.


“Please feel free to contact my buddies and me if you believe I fit the profile required.

Looking forward to hearing from you whenever you guys can drop me a line.




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